Volume VIII, Issue No.4
March 1,2000
In
This Issue: Linking Classroom and Community
Sammy Sosa, Fenway Park, and Literacy
By Emily Tuttle
That spring Joe DiMaggio
died. Catfish Hunter fell victim to Lou Gehrig's disease, and Joe
Torre found out that he had cancer. Fans were already beginning
to mourn the hallowed grounds of Fenway where the Green Monster
towered over a field of dreams in the heart of Boston. A glance
at the sports headlines had my students wondering what was this
American sport that honored ghosts.
"Do all baseball players
have cancer, Mrs. Tuttle?" they asked. "Who are all these old, dead
guys?" These students had never heard of The Yankee Clipper, Catfish,
The Iron Man, or The Green Monster. They couldn't distinguish between
the strange names for humans and those for ballparks. These students
had never played the game of America's childhood, never watched
the game called America's pastime. These students were not American.
They came from Rwanda,
Cambodia, Russia, Yugoslavia, Iran, The Sudan, Somalia, Saudi Arabia,
and even California. They were sixth, seventh, and eighth graders
who could not read in English past the second-grade level. Some
had newly arrived in the United States. Others had been here since
birth. Some had fled the horrors of anarchy and mass killing, while
others had escaped ethnic and religious persecution. A couple of
students actually liked school, but most did not. These 15 misfits
comprised one of the Intermediate English Speakers of Other Languages
(ESOL) classes at King Middle School in Portland, Maine.
I found myself relating
to these students in ways that I had almost forgotten were mine.
My first language was Japanese, and I came to the United States
when I was five. My Okinawan mother gave me the physical traits
and traditions that separated me from my classmates. My American
father gave me the confidence that I could, should, and would, excel.
He taught me that the key to excellence was knowledge, and that
knowledge came from avid reading and accomplishment. I had been
in between cultures then, and so were my students now. These students
were my team.
CULTURE SHOCK It was
only my second year at King, only my second year in Maine, and only
my second year teaching middle schoolers. In most respects, my first
year had been a disaster. I had given up lesson-planning because
of a school schedule caught between the goal of partial mainstreaming
and individual house schedules. Three or four students would leave
the room for their math classes in the middle of a literature discussion,
while two more returned from their social studies classes and tried
to catch up on what they had just missed.
While I tried to maintain
some sense of order with the revolving door menace, the rest of
the school was doing some strange thing called Expeditionary Learning.
My students and I were confounded by what was going on. The mainstream
teachers tried to include the ESOL students into their expeditions,
but the basic concept of cross-curriculum work meant that these
partially mainstreamed students were only partially getting the
big picture. My students wondered, "Why can't we do that stuff?"
What really got to me was that some of the students had stopped
asking the question and merely accepted that, "We can't do that
stuff."
Fortunately, the principal
at King, Michael McCarthy, listened to my struggles. In the past,
he had grudgingly deferred to the policies of the district's Multilingual
staff. McCarthy had guided King toward Expeditionary Learning while
the district's ESL program went a separate course. We were ready
to bring the ESL classes up to par with the rest of the school.
As timing would have it, the district Multilingual Office staff
were working on a federal Title VII grant proposal. We used this
opening as a chance to restructure the ESL program to reflect Expeditionary
Learning.
SUCCESS IN THE MAINSTREAM
When our proposal was
accepted, we started asking ourselves, wouldn't a self-contained
program be the opposite of our full inclusion policy at King? Wouldn't
the all-or-nothing approach create anxiety in students? Finally,
we agreed that accelerated and intensive English instruction would
actually speed up mainstreaming. No one believed that justice was
being served by keeping students in an ESL program for six or seven
years. We kept our focus on figuring out how to teach students to
read and write English and to be successful in the mainstream classes.
For six years, I wrote
for daily newspapers across the country, and I remembered my training
as a writer-be clear, concise, correct, and write about what you
know. Surely it wasn't too big a leap to apply those maxims to teaching.
I knew newspapers, I knew baseball, and I had passion for both.
It seemed like an expedition on writing about baseball might pull
it all together. I wanted the expedition to help students gain academic
skills while they discovered something about success and being American-that
you don't have to be born in the United States to be a successful
American. I decided our guiding questions would be, What does it
take to be a Big League player? What makes baseball so American?
We were lucky enough
at King Middle School to be on the same block as Hadlock Field where
the Florida Marlins' minor league team, the Portland Sea Dogs, played.
We were only two hours from Boston's Fenway Park. If the students
could talk to real professional athletes and see a Major League
game, I knew that reading and writing wouldn't just be a classroom
exercise. For their main project, students would produce a program
for the Sea Dogs to be presented at a home game. The Sea Dogs marketing
director, Mike Gillogly, agreed to the project and arranged for
classroom speakers, interviews with the players, free tickets to
a game, and a chance for the students to hand out their work to
baseball fans at the gate.
THE STARTING LINE-UP
I had no trouble choosing our primary text: the newspaper. We would
learn skimming, scanning, indexing, using graphic and context clues,
gleaning from charts, vocabulary, and paraphrasing-the skills I
needed to teach for reading textbooks-from the sports section of
the Portland Press Herald. Once the students learned about baseball
from outside experts and they had chosen a favorite team, reading
the newspaper became a morning ritual. They walked in the classroom
each day to find the morning's newspaper on their desks, and they
turned to the sports section.
It took three weeks for
the students to understand why we were doing this. Then one morning,
I walked in a couple minutes late and found the students with their
noses buried in headlines and box scores. "Mrs. Tuttle, did you
know that Joe DiMaggio was married to a movie star?" "Mrs. Tuttle,
did you know that Sammy Sosa is Hispanic?" The conversations swirled
as they checked the standings so early after spring training. "The
Yankees are up on Boston by three games." "I bet Mark McGwire breaks
his own record this year."
A BREAKTHROUGH WITH THE
CLASS NOVEL I've always found choosing a novel slightly dangerous.
The right one can open worlds to students and pique interest in
continued reading. The wrong one can shut down a student to reading.
Luckily, In the Year of the Boar and Jackie Robinson, by Bette Bao
Lord proved to be the perfect book. The story about a Chinese girl
learning English in America by learning baseball seemed tailor-made
for my class. Every student read, discussed, and wrote about the
book. For most students, it was the first time they had finished
a book because they wanted to, and the first time they had written
a book report that made sense.
Hiwa, an eighth grader
from Iran, read In the Year of the Boar and Jackie Robinson without
threat of punishment and without bribery. For the first time since
he had come to Portland, Hiwa read an entire novel. Hiwa had been
in my class the year before and was on his third year of ESOL classes
at King. He had been partially mainstreamed for his first two years
and knew that other students participated in expeditions, but he
usually missed the kick-off event or the experts visiting class
and the field experiences. All he knew was the heap of work that
an expedition demanded, which he had always failed to produce. At
times he would act out in anger and slam books around. At times
he would cry in frustration and refuse to talk. Hiwa was bright,
he was proud, but he didn't understand what he read. "I can't do
it," was his alibi when he failed to turn in an assignment. "I don't
know what it says. I don't wanna do it. I don't care if I get an
F." But he did care.
Because Hiwa was there
for every part of the expedition, because he understood the guiding
questions and the product we were working on, he realized that the
reading was a means to the end. He had to read and become educated
in baseball so that he could get the best baseball cards, so that
he could talk to the Sea Dogs players, so that he could know what
the Red Sox were doing in Boston. What came as a surprise to him
was that reading could also be an end, the objective in itself.
Hiwa actually enjoyed reading In the Year of the Boar and Jackie
Robinson. Out of the class of 15, Hiwa produced the best book report.
It took nine drafts, which demonstrated a profound attitude change.
All the students knew I expected perfection and didn't care how
many drafts they had to write. Some needed only three or four. But
Hiwa overcame his tendency to make excuses and to quit before he
finished something. Hiwa wrote a wonderful book report.
Independently, Hiwa went
on to read a biography of his own choosing. This time, he didn't
go looking through the library stacks for the shortest book. Hiwa
had decided to adopt the Yankees as his team and found a book about
a Yankee player. All of the students chose a biography and simply
had to summarize, in journalistic fashion: who, what, when, where.
Clear requirements also helped Hiwa complete his tasks.
Other students experienced
their own reading victories. Everyone finished their reading and
gained new knowledge and meaning from their books. Some students
decided that the theme of In the Year of the Boar and Jackie Robinson
was learning how to make friends, or that leaving their own country
was hard. Even though they had never heard of Jackie Robinson and
were unfamiliar with baseball, they could all relate to Shirley
Temple Wong's experience. They knew how ridicule and confusion felt.
They saw the humor in their own mistakes in English, and they liked
the happy ending. Maybe they would have a happy ending too. Many
of the students shared these feelings in their project journal.
Pio, an eighth grader from The Sudan, wrote:
I learn that if you don't
know English and student are laughing at you I learn not to give
up. I think if you came from another country just speak and don't
care about others if they are laughing at you.
Journals helped both
the students and me. I could get a sense of students' comprehension
and interest from the journals, but more importantly, the students
gained much needed practice in putting thoughts into English words
on paper. We tried to write in our journals every day, and we tried
to write on every topic and issue, but we did neither. We did manage,
however, to write enough to realize that our writing had improved
over the course of the expedition. Before they had completed half
of the expedition, the students stopped writing for the incentive
of earning baseball cards and started writing for themselves. We
saw the difference between spontaneous writing and going through
a writing process. We saw the value in seeing our own thoughts on
the page. The students laughed at their own English mistakes as
they reflected on their own journals.
TAKING ON THE SPORTS
BEAT We had done our homework. We had listened to the experts. We
were now ready to produce. After thorough reading of press releases,
news articles, and Internet web site updates, students felt confident
that they could ask Sea Dogs players questions like professional
reporters, but they weren't so confident in the face-to-face approach.
We practiced speaking, pronouncing troublesome words, and making
eye contact.
Once we walked onto Hadlock
Field, down and into the dugouts, the students relaxed. They had
gone over and over their questions. They knew baseball terminology,
and they knew they could write a biographical article on a player.
As I ran around snapping pictures, I felt ecstatic. They were doing
it-all of the them, not just the naturally confident and overachieving.
Every single student armed with pen and pad interacted with professional
athletes.
We couldn't wait to get
back to the classroom and tell each other about the players. By
now, the writing process and the understanding that I would accept
nothing less than perfection didn't even daunt the students. They
worked away on the computers like they had grown up with them. They
revised and revised, some of them a dozen times. They knew that
they would have bylines just like Jordan, and they didn't want any
mistakes. I was only there to guide and to edit. It was their project
now, not mine.
TAKE ME OUT TO THE BALL
GAME When the four-page flyers came back from the printers, students
asked for several advanced copies to give to their friends. They
couldn't wait for the Sea Dogs' final home stand before school let
out for the summer. Finally the day came. Most of King Middle School
would be at that afternoon game in June. Laden with batches of their
flyers, the students nervously stood at the ticket gates. Several
of the students had been mainstreamed by this time after having
improved their reading skills by at least two grade levels and having
proven that they could write in any expository form, even if it
did take a few drafts. Those students were released from their classes
to participate in this culminating event. A few new students had
joined the class, and the rookies took orders from the veterans.
"Are we going to do this next year?" the bush-leaguers asked. Ball
park staff and players waived hello like old friends during the
pregame preparations. The students beamed, glowed, and positively
radiated when the gates opened and bus-loads of school students
entered.
Success was confirmed
when the students saw others in the stands-complete strangers-reading
work with their names on it. Two local newspapers published write-ups
on the students and the expedition. Three of the students even got
their own bylines in the Portland Press Herald. Students continued
to read the newspaper long after they finished the project, as they
followed their favorite teams into the summer. In the fall when
they returned to school, nearly all of them started the year in
mainstream classes without any qualms. They found me and discussed
the upcoming World Series as knowledgeable fans. They lamented some
of the teams' summer performances. They knew the names of many of
the players who had made the All Century list. They were not just
some foreign students in an ESOL class looking in from the outside.
They had become King Middle School students in Portland, Maine,
who just happened to be smart enough to know more than one language.
Emily Tuttle teaches
at King Middle School in Portland, Maine.
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Sum Doesn't Mean Sometimes?
Expeditionary Learning School Designer Patti Smith interviewed
teacher Peter Dubno, an eighth-grade math teacher at the New York
City Lab School, about his views on teaching the "language of mathematics."
Dubno: One of the most challenging things about being a
math teacher is teaching the language of mathematics. Many of our
students are not versed enough in the language to successfully complete
math problems. Second-language learners struggle even more than
native English speakers do. Armed with that knowledge, as teachers,
we need to emphasize mathematical and technical language.
Improving technical reading
is one thing that we have to strive for in the mathematics classroom.
We have children who can read 500-page novels in one, two, or three
days, but they struggle through technical material.
For example, students
struggle with vocabulary. We have students who don't know the meaning
of words such as exceed, diminish, increase, decrease, divided by,
tripled or halved. They don't know how to read the words and translate
them into mathematics.
Students have a hard
time comprehending word problems. They make assumptions about a
question without thoroughly reading it. Students also struggle with
description. If I let them, they would say, "First I did this, then
I did that, then the thing went over here and I put it over there,
and that's how I got the answer."
In my classroom, I am
the model. The students hear me use descriptive language and they
are asked to read, write, and present with technical proficiency.
For example, they did the writing assignment, "What is zero? Is
it something or nothing?" Some students came up with very, very
good writing. Some of it was very technical. Others needed a lot
of help.
This year during the
learning expedition Westward Expansion, the math project required
students to gather statistical research information about their
state, to write a technical description using the collected data,
and to present the data in front of the class using technical language
and illustrations. In grading the students' work, they know I look
for good technical language and appropriate usage.
Smith: What are some
of the techniques that other teachers could use to help students
speak math language?
Dubno: I would
suggest that teachers develop projects that help students use vocabulary
that is descriptive and technical. In my room I have a poster of
math vocabulary for each unit and I often refer to it during lessons.
I think teachers should routinely post vocabulary words.
Second, give the students
things to read where they have to think on a mathematical, technical
level, and understand things on a mathematical, technical level.
My students actually write out word problems. I ask them to read
them to themselves so they become familiar with the language and
the spellings of the technical words that we use. Then I will often
have them read the problems aloud to the class.
Give students the opportunity
to present their work orally, and expect them to present all the
technical aspects of their projects, including equations, drawings,
diagrams, and whatever else is assigned. This way they have to learn
to be technically proficient in their description of what they are
presenting. In my class, students frequently come to the front of
the room and present. That is a very big step in becoming proficient
in technical speaking.
The more they see, the
more they write. The more they read, the more products they are
involved with. The more descriptions and details they must give
in their presentations, the more proficient they will become. In
my class, students can now present their projects in a detailed
fashion. They are using better mathematical language and technical
language. We have to help them experience the beauty of talking
intellectually and technically.
Smith: How could you
facilitate an expedition on technical terminology?
Dubno: Students
could bring in different appliances with their technical guides,
and be required to read the manual and demonstrate different aspects
of the appliance to the class. They could then develop a manual
for their own invention, or even an existing invention. This type
of expedition would help them in developing their language, and
give them a topic to write about. It would make them look for, understand,
and use technical language correctly.
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The
Reader's/Writer's Workshop
By Mariah Dickson
As Expeditionary Learning teachers step from the Expeditionary Learning
Outward Bound Literacy Platform and try to navigate their way through
a rich, but unfamiliar, literacy landscape, three instructional
priorities become essential: time, choice, and explicit instruction.
Students need time to read and write, and this time must be sacred.
Every day, students need regularly scheduled, uninterrupted blocks
of time in school for independent reading and writing. Students
also need opportunities to choose their own reading texts and writing
topics, styles, and formats. To engage fully in their own reading
and writing endeavors, students must be able to make decisions based
on their individual skill levels, interests, and preferences. Finally,
students need direct, explicit instruction from their teachers to
learn how to read and write proficiently.
The Expeditionary Learning
Outward Bound Literacy Platform calls for time, choice, and explicit
instruction, and the Reader's/Writer's Workshop model provides the
template necessary to take those initial steps from the platform
to the classroom, from theory into practice.
TIME A Reader's/Writer's
Workshop requires a regular, uninterrupted, long block of time for
literacy instruction, and it provides daily opportunities for teacher
modeling, independent work, and shared learning. While some teachers
see reading and writing as inseparable components of the same process,
others choose to set aside separate chunks of time for Reader's
Workshop and Writer's Workshop. Ideally, a teacher will devote as
much as 90 minutes each day to literacy. Although a workshop can
be fit into a 45-or 50-minute block of time, increasing time on
task has proven the single most effective way to improve both reading
and writing.
The workshop usually
begins with a mini-lesson, a brief segment(5-20 minutes) during
which explicit instruction takes place. The teacher explains and
models a strategy or technique, using think-alouds to reveal her
thinking to the students.
Students then practice
what they have learned in the mini-lesson during an independent
reading/writing time, the longest component of the workshop. Depending
on the age of the students and the level of independence that they
have achieved, this part of the workshop can last anywhere from
20 minutes to an hour. While students work independently, the teacher
confers with them, either individually or in small groups. This
independent time can also be used for literature circles or invitational
groups based on shared needs or interests.
The daily workshop culminates
in a time for sharing (5-20 minutes), when students share their
writing or insights about their reading from that day. The format
for such sharing can vary widely, depending on the purpose. If the
teacher wants every student to share and talk about his work that
day, she might choose a "pair share." If the goal is to hear every
student, however, she might choose a full-class "circle share" instead.
The use of time will
vary widely from classroom to classroom, depending both on teacher
style and student needs. It doesn't matter exactly how much time
the teacher spends on each component of the workshop; it simply
matters that students spend a great deal of their time every day
actually engaged in the reading and writing process.
CHOICE Introducing student
choice into the classroom can be the most difficult change for teachers
to make in their literacy instruction. While it is easy to agree
that teachers need to spend more time on literacy and that students
need as much explicit instruction as possible, it is often hard
to give up those deeply rooted notions of which novel every student
must read or which writing genres must be mastered for high school
or college. Nevertheless, teachers sometimes have to let go of the
five-paragraph essay or Jane Eyre in order to achieve real student
growth in literacy.
In Build a Literate Classroom,
Donald Graves encourages teachers to make the switch from literature
textbooks (or basals at the elementary level) to trade books. This
transition requires teachers to build classroom libraries, so that
they can provide a wide variety of texts for their students. Classroom
libraries include many different genres of texts (novels, poetry,
magazines, picture books, etc.), texts by both contemporary and
well-loved authors, texts on topics of interest to students, and
texts of varying length and difficulty.
As readers, most teachers
take for granted the process of choosing a text to read. Many students
do not know how to select text, however, and their teachers should
model and provide explicit instruction in this process. Teachers
can show how they preview a text by examining the cover and reading
the first few pages. Graves describes how students can assess the
appropriate level of difficulty of a text if they learn how to identify
an "easy, medium, and challenge" book.
Teachers can model this
process by selecting their own texts, with attention to number of
words on a page, size of type, number of words that they don't know
on a page, etc. Teachers can also demonstrate how they choose a
text based on their prior knowledge of the topic and/or author.
According to Ellin Keene in Mosaic of Thought, a student's prior
knowledge (or schema) is "the single most important influence on
the readability of a text." The more a student knows about a topic,
author, or genre, the more accessible the text will be.
DIRECT, EXPLICIT INSTRUCTION
The mini-lessons in the workshop model provide the necessary framework
for direct, explicit instruction. At the beginning of the workshop,
the teacher introduces the strategy or skill that students will
work on that day. She then models the strategy, using read-alouds
and think-alouds to show her own application of the strategy. While
thinking aloud, the teacher clearly explains that she is doing so
in order to show her thinking as she applies a strategy to the text.
She also clearly distinguishes that she is thinking aloud rather
than simply reading aloud.
In In the Middle, Nancie
Atwell describes how she use mini-lessons for several different
purposes. At the beginning of the year, she employs "procedural"
mini-lessons to teach workshop routines, guidelines, and expectations.
During "craft" mini-lessons, she addresses "techniques, styles,
genres, authors, and works of literature." Atwell also presents
mini-lessons about conventions, using students' writing to address
the conventions that they "violate" most frequently. Atwell offers
mini-lessons about reading comprehension strategies as well, demonstrating
what proficient readers do. Atwell's chapter on mini-lessons in
In the Middle includes wonderful lists of mini-lessons for each
type that she discusses.
Within the workshop format,
the teacher can employ The Gradual Release of Responsibility Model
(Gallagher & Pearson) as a way to move from teacher modeling and
explanation of a strategy or technique to independent student use.
The workshop begins with the teacher claiming full responsibility
for the use of a strategy, as she explains and models it during
the mini-lesson. After explicit explanation and modeling, the teacher
gradually transfers responsibility to her students by engaging them
in guided practice. The teacher and her students practice the strategy
together, in both large and small groups, and the students slowly
become more confident and skilled. At that point, the teacher finally
transfers full responsibility to the students, who now practice
the strategy on their own.
CONFERENCES In a Reader's/Writer's
Workshop, the teacher confers with her students every day while
they are reading or writing independently. Through conferences,
she gains a sense of each student's progress, and she can respond
immediately to their work, offering individualized assistance as
needed. The teacher usually moves around the room to confer, spending
a few minutes with a student to assess his application of that day's
mini-lesson. She will rarely have the opportunity to confer with
every student every day, but she can check in with every student
at least once or twice a week. Small-group conferences can also
be effective to reinforce a skill or strategy with a number of students
who are struggling, and book clubs or literature circles are also
an option for students to confer with one another.
The Reader's/Writer's
Workshop provides an effective classroom structure to implement
the best practices set out in Expeditionary Learning's Literacy
Platform. The "words, worlds, and wonder" that await in a strange
land can too often overwhelm once you descend from the platform.
The task of implementing all that you have researched can appear
daunting, if not impossible. However, armed with a plan of action
and a structure for your exploration, you can confidently step off
of the platform and into promising new literacy terrain.
Mariah Dickson is
program director of the Teaching and Learning Center at the Public
Education and Business Coalition in Denver, Colorado.
REFERENCES
Atwell, Nancie. 1998.
In the Middle: New Understandings About Writing, Reading, and
Learning. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann.
Gallagher, M., and P.D.
Pearson. 1983. The Instruction of Reading Comprehension in Contemporary
Educational Psychology.
Graves, Donald H. 1991.
Build A Literate Classroom. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann.
Keene, Ellin Oliver and
Susan Zimmermann. 1997. Mosaic of Thought. Portsmouth, NH:
Heinemann.
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Writing Down Science
By Carol Duehr and Christina Nugent
The turkey vulture's
egg is creamy white like whipped cream with red sprinkles.
This is not the typical
topic sentence of a reluctant fifth-grade boy. But during our interactive
study of birds and their ecosystems, Eric became enthralled with
studying about birds. Our studies motivated him to describe the
turkey vulture's eggs accurately and to eagerly apply writing skills
taught in class.
We think that students
learn to their greatest potential when immersed in a topic all day.
For this reason, during this expedition we do not just study science
during one 45-minute class period a day, but throughout the day.
We read books about birds during reading class, we pull spelling
words from our expedition, and we learn grammar, English, and writing
through the writing and editing of our bird books.
Fifth-grade students
in the Dubuque Community Schools in Dubuque, Iowa are expected to
learn personal narrative and nonfiction report writing. At Fulton
Intermediate School, daily journal writing is one way we give students
the practice they need to become good writers. They might choose
to elaborate on the daily prompt on the blackboard or to pick a
topic of their own choice. The journals alert us to areas of grammar,
usage, and mechanics we need to stress in mini-lessons and in daily
oral language exercises.
We find, however, that
students learn best when they are writing for a purpose and for
an audience. We try to create these opportunities by assigning the
class to write thank-you letters to a guest speaker or by asking
students to write letters requesting information pertaining to the
expedition. Or, for example, as a creative writing exercise, students
write a "For Sale" ad for a bird's home as part of a study on birds'
nests. The ads are humorous, creative, and very descriptive.
Another creative writing
opportunity comes when our baby chicks hatch. Students are especially
motivated to learn about eggs because we hatch chicken eggs in an
incubator in our classroom. After constructing a three-dimensional
egg model, we ask each student to become an "expert" on a specific
egg part. Students then visit the experts and identify the part
and explain its function. This prepares students to creatively apply
their knowledge in a fictional narrative, "A Newborn Chick's First
Day."
These narratives introduce
descriptive adjectives and first-person narrative. The assignment
also helps students assimilate their knowledge about the incubation
period as well as the parts and functions of an egg. We assign the
narrative after the class has spent every available moment observing
the chicks hatch in an incubator, and watching them grow after they
are moved into a heated container. The class discusses and writes
in their journals about each exciting new development.
The fictional narrative
writing allows students to examine their world from a different
perspective. It encourages them to scrutinize what they take for
granted. This description piece also allows them more creativity.
To start writing this piece, we model the writing on a large piece
of chart paper. Then after carefully examining our group writing,
the students build a rubric. The rubric focuses on using descriptive
adjectives and phrases, describing hatching in a correct sequence,
and using the first-person narrative and correct mechanics. The
students take off from there.
In the personal narrative,
students have an opportunity to express their observations of the
incubation process in a creative, fun way. Fifth grader Andy wrote
from the perspective of the chick inside the eggshell, "Am I getting
bigger or is this thing getting smaller?"
The personal narrative
fosters expression in a way that students thoroughly enjoy. They
are invested in the writing because they have first-hand experience
from watching the incubation and hatching of the chicks.
Through our interactive
study of birds we enable our students to reach their potential as
readers and writers. Instead of teaching skills such as similes
and metaphors in isolation, we choose to apply them to the in-depth
topic of study. Not only are we broadening their knowledge base
about ecosystems, but we are also teaching them valuable life skills,
such as creative writing, researching, and the value of quality
work.
Carol Duehr and Christina
Nugent teach at Fulton Intermediate School in Dubuque, Iowa.
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